You have just received a credit card statement from your bank. The statement lists a number of expensive purchases that you are sure you did not make. Write a letter to the bank manager. In the letter: • Introduce yourself. • Explain that you did not buy the items listed. • Say what you would like the bank to do to fix the problem.

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to notify you about some

transacitions

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transactions

in my

credit

card statement which is not initiated by me. I am Jennifer Ramos, a current account customer in your bank, My account number is 123456789. I have been using your platinum

credit

card for

last

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five years, and I am paying back my

credit

with out

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any due. On September 30,

2023

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have

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received a

credit

card statement from your bank which includes ten online

purchase

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which is not made from my side. The sum of the purchase is 15000 dollars, and the transaction is

suspecious

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suspicious

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the online website is based outside of the country. I am

also

recieving

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receiving

text

message

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for each payment ,

however

, I have not received any

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for these transactions. So kindly investigate

about

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the fraud activity and clear my liability. Look forward to hearing from you. Yours faithfully, Jennifer Ramos.

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