The three pie charts show the proportion of four kinds of vehicles used in the UK in 1996, 1985 and 2005. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the man features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The diagram
illustrate
the proportion of vehicled uses in the UK vary from 3 different kinds during some period of time (1985, 1996 and 2005). Change the verb form
illustrates
Overall
, private car is the most prominent figures
and keep Fix the agreement mistake
figure
increased
along the Wrong verb form
increasing
periode
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period
while
the number
of recreational transport
share the least.
According to
the data, about 40% of UK citizen in 1965 was using private cars while
public transport
and the
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apply
others kind
of Fix the agreement mistake
other kinds
transport
were used by 25% and 20% respectively. Furthermore
only 15% of the citizen used recreational vehicles and after 20 years the Add a comma
Furthermore,
number
plummeted to 5%. The private
cars users kept increased to 60% Correct quantifier usage
number of private
at the end
of Correct article usage
the periode
periode
, in Correct your spelling
period
contras
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contrast
other kind
of Change the wording
another kind
other kinds
transport
shared similar
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a similar
number
from the previous periode
.
In 2005, Correct your spelling
period
Recreatinal
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Recreational
vehincle
and other Correct your spelling
vehicle
vehicles
transport
almost share similar
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a similar
number
, which is recreational vehicle bounce
back higher from 5% to 8%. Wrong verb form
bounced
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words number, transport with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "proportion" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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