The bar chart below shows the percentage of Australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010.

The bar graph illustrates the amount of physical activities done by Australian

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and women in percentage by

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throughout 2010.

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between 15 and 24

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the most exercise, but the

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35 to 44

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the least exercise,

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about half of the women in every

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physical activities. First of all, 52.8

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of students in high school and university have done physical activity.

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started to slightly drop to about 40 out of 100 by the next 20 years of

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and constantly gained the rate back up by 3, 2, and 1

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for every 10 years passed respectively.

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, about 1 out of 2 females

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their physical activity

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all

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, which have

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53.3

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for

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to 53

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and the lowest rate as they reach the

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of 65 years old.