The bar chart below shows the percentage of Australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010.
The bar graph illustrates the amount of physical activities done by Australian
mens
and women in percentage by Correct your spelling
men
men's
age
group
throughout 2010.
Overall
, it can be seen that,
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mens
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men
who
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age
between 15 and 24 Wrong verb form
aged
done
the most exercise, but the Wrong verb form
did
one
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ones
who
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age
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aged
from
35 to 44 Change preposition
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done
the least exercise, Wrong verb form
did
while
about half of the women in every age
group
done
physical activities.
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did
percent
of students in high school and university have done physical activity. Change the spelling
per cent
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started to slightly drop to about 40 out of 100 by the next 20 years of Fix the agreement mistake
gentlemen
age
,
and constantly gained the rate back up by 3, 2, and 1 Remove the comma
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percent
for every 10 years passed respectively. Change the spelling
per cent
Moreover
, about 1 out of 2 females done
their physical activity Wrong verb form
did
at
all Change preposition
in
age
group
, which have Fix the agreement mistake
groups
the
peak Correct article usage
a
at
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of
percent
for Change the spelling
per cent
45
to 53 Correct article usage
the 45
age
group
and the lowest rate as they reach the age
of 65 years old.Submitted by dondollaraus on
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