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Some people regard video games as harmless fun. Others, however, believe that video games arc having an adverse effect on the people who play them. Do the drawbacks of video games outweigh the benefits?

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Some people believe that
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games
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 do a lot of good to those who play them. Others argue that
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 they are harmful. In my view, there are more advantages than disadvantages
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 playing
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games
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. On the one hand, there are drawbacks to playing
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. Gaming can be highly addictive.
Users
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 are constantly given scores, new targets and frequent rewards to keep them playing.
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, many children now spend hours each day trying to progress through the levels of a game or to get a higher score than their friends. If they did not waste their time playing
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, they would not experience negative effects
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 as problems at school or lack of sleep.
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, I would argue that these drawbacks are outweighed by the benefits.
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,
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, or gamers, are transported into a virtual world which is often more exciting than real-life pastimes.
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, children tend to imagine themselves as heroes when they play computer
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, rescuing planets and saving other people's lives.
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, these
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 encourage imagination and creativity,
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 logical thinking and problem-solving. Children greatly improve their reasoning ability
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 playing
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.
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, computer simulation
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 can improve
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' motor skills and help to prepare them for real-world tasks.
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games
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 cause young
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 to make independent decisions. In conclusion, it seems to me that the benefits of
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 are more significant than the drawbacks. If we do not play them more than needed, it can influence us in a good way.
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