The line graph shows the number of trips to other countries by UK residents for various purposes between 1989 and 2001.

The line graph shows the number of trips to other countries by UK residents for various purposes between 1989 and 2001.
The given line chart illustrates the
quantity
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number
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of excursions to other nations by UK inhabitants for various intentions
such
as holidays, business,
family
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and family
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visits over a period of 13
years
from 1989 to 2001. It is clear from the graph that, in 1998, the total
number
of journeys was the highest. The amount of trips for the purpose of holidays was always higher than others over a period of 13
years
. The figure for
excursion
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the excursion
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of UK residents going on holiday grew sharply from 30 to 50 million between 1989 and 1998 and hit a peak in 1998.
Then
,
this
number
experienced a significant decrease from 50 to 39
units
in the following
years
. Regarding the trips for business, there was a slow go up by 2
units
from 1989 to 1995, and these data dropped slightly between 1995 and 2001 by 2
units
. With the data
of
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family visits purpose, there was a substantial rise over a period of 13
years
by 7
units
. Regarding the
number
of journeys for other purposes,
this
figure jumped moderately from 5 to 8
units
between 1989 and 1995,
then
there was a steady fall of 6
units
from 1995 to 2001. The total
number
of trips climbed rapidly between 1989 and 1998 from 47 to 73,5
units
.
Then
, there was a slight go down for 12,5
units
from 1998 to 2001
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