vou want to complain about the service you received in the hotel you stayed in while attending a recent meeting. Write a letter to the person who organised the meeting. In your letter • • • describe the meeting explain the problems with the service suggest what the meeting organiser should do.

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Recpect
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sir/madam I am writing
letter
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a letter
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for
dissatisified
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dissatisfied
service
i
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I
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recieved
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received
in your hotel when
i
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I
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stayed here for
attend
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my company meeting. My company member
origanised
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organised
meeting in your hotel
last
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week . Because we check your online view it is very good so we decided to organised meeting here. But when we attend
meeting
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the meeting
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. We have
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lot of disturbs . When we order something eatable we
not
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recieved
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receive
on
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time . After that we complaint we
get
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nit good
reponse
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response
. We were very upset . I inform to you please check all of
things
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quickly.
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faithfully Sumandeep
kaur
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