24.With the increasing demand for energy sources of oil and gas, people should look for sources of oil and gas in remote and untouched natural places. Do the advantages outweigh disadvantages of damaging such areas?

It is said that individuals should look for places where

sources

of

oil

and gas can be found

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since more and more of them are needed.

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essay would argue that despite these products can lead to

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revolution,

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also

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environmental damage,

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means that the advantages do not outweigh the drawbacks. The

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is that

oil

and gas hosts can lead to

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revolution, allowing more people to have employment opportunities, since in some jobs more

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workers would be needed, in

this

way, unemployed people will reduce.

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,

oil

creates gasoline supplies, reducing its price, contributing to economic growth and

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sustainable development of the country.

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, in

Spain

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the price of

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gasoline increased after the war between Russia and

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Ukraine

began

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because they lost a source where they could get

petrolium

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petroleum

.

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other ways,

such

as the use of electric cars, where gasoline is not needed, and it won’t cause any harm to the planet. The great drawback is that it is harmful

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the world. The main reason is that looking for

sources

in

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detrimental and

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adverse effects on

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nature. Excessive use of fossil fuels and

oil

,

gas

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extraction leads to a surge in global temperatures affecting green

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. Causing damage in natural areas and spreading diseases affecting humans and animals,

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will be

distubed

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disturbed

due to

human intervention.

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, because of climate change,

sources

of fresh water are reducing,

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causes life danger

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all living things, since they need water to live.

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touching natural areas for

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energy

sources

are more significant than the benefits. In conclusion,

although

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sources

in

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environmnet

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environment

environments

will increase the number of

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and the economy of the country, it will scarce the

essencial

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essential

resources that living things need, for these reasons, the negatives far outnumber the positives.