the charts below show the number of university students in a particular country and how much the government spent on each student between 1984 and 2009 as well as the financial condition of the student's families. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

the charts below show the number of university students in a particular country and how much the government spent on each student between 1984 and 2009 as well as the financial condition of the student's families. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
The given charts illustrate the
quantity
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of students at university in a particular country and the
government
's spending
on
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per student between 1984 and 2009.
Overall
, by increasing the number of students at university,
government's
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government
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spending during
this
period, with the exception of
last
year, has decreased. In the first year (1984), 150
thousand
students studied in higher educational institutions. In 1989, the index rose sharply to 250
thousand
. But after 5 years
this
number dropped to 200
thousand
. In subsequent years,
this
figure grew steadily and in 2009 amounted to 400
thousand
. The
government
's spending started with more than 14
thousand
in 1984. In 1989,
this
number fell
up
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to 12,500. After a little rise in 1994, the index fell to
his
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its
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minimum in 2004 by showing about 11,000. In 2009,
government's
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the government's
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spending rose to about 1,000.
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