The chart below shows the value of one country exports in various categories during 2015 and 2016. The table shows the percentage change in each category of exports in2016 compared to 2015.

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The provided bar chart depicts information about how much five categories of exports were worth in one nation in 2015 and 2016. The table illustrates the difference in percentage points of value in five categories in 2016 in comparison with 2015.

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, it can be seen that the earnings from exports in five categories followed an upward trend except for gems and jewellery.

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, the highest rise in values is seen in textiles

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the lowest is in agricultural

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with, petroleum

products

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and engineered goods showed the highest growth in export earnings, which were around 61

million

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and 58

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in 2015 and rose to around 63

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and 62

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in 2016, respectively.

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, textiles and agricultural

products

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earned more in export in 2016 than in 2015, more or less 27

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and 32

million

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in 2015,respectively, which increased to approximately 33

million

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in 2016.

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, earnings from gems and jewellery followed a downward trend from around 43

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in 2015 to 41

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in 2016. On the table, textile value changed in the highest percentage point at around 15.24% followed by engineered goods at around 8.5% in comparison with 2016 to 2015. Meanwhile, gems and jewellery, petroleum

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and agricultural

products

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changed their values by around 5.18%, 35 and 0.81%, respectively.

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export value
trend analysis
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