The diagram below shows how glass is recycled. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below shows how glass is recycled. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The progress diagram illustrates the different stages of recycling
glass
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.
Overall
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, the process involves five steps which can be grounded into three main phases; collection of
glass
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, recycling and
delivering
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to supermarkets. In terms of the collection of
glass
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, it is first collected in a house or workplace, where people throw
glass
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bottles into a recycle bin.
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this
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, it is delivered by a special vehicle to the treatment plant, where
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glass
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the glass
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is cleaned. As far as
process
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the process
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of
glass
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collection is concerned, there is a recycling stage. After that,
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glass
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the glass
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undergoes a washing process, and
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it is sterilised in order to kill bacteria on the surface of the
glass
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. It happens in specialised machines.
Subsequently
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,
glass
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is crushed and melted in specific equipment.
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, there is the stage of moulding
glass
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, where it is shaped in the other form,
for example
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, a bottle. The final stage is
deliveling
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delivering
glass
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bottles to supermarkets, and
then
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the cycle happens again
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Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words glass with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 2 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • diagram
  • recycled
  • stages
  • collection
  • waste glass
  • sources
  • bottles
  • jars
  • windows
  • transported
  • recycling facility
  • sorted
  • color
  • processes
  • cleaned
  • impurities
  • labels
  • caps
  • crushed
  • cullet
  • raw material
  • melted
  • furnace
  • temperature
  • molded
  • new glass products
  • distribution
  • consumers
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