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The table below describes water usage for 3 different purposes in 6 countries in 2003. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The table below describes water usage for 3 different purposes in 6 countries in 2003. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The table illustrates changes in
water
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usage
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 for three distinct
purposes
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 across six countries in the year 2003.
Overall
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,
Australia
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 had the highest proportion of
water
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usage
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 for domestic
purposes
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,
Canada
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 for industrial use, and the
UK
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 for
agriculture
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.
Conversely
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, these same countries had the lowest
usage
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 for the other two
purposes
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. Notably, all countries utilized less
water
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 for domestic and industrial
purposes
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 compared to
agriculture
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.
Furthermore
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, the
UK
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, China, and
India
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 stood out as the top three nations with the highest percentage of
water
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 use for
agriculture
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. In
Australia
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, domestic
water
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usage
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 accounted for the largest share, at 65%,
while
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Canada
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 had a
similarly
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 high percentage, with Austria trailing behind at only 2%. The
UK
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 and China had notably low domestic
water
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usage
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, with the former at 5% and the latter at 6%.
In contrast
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, Japan's domestic
water
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usage
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 was nearly twice as high as that of
India
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. Industrial
water
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usage
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 was significantly lower than the other two categories, with
Australia
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 at just 2%,
while
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Canada
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's industrial
usage
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 was 16 times higher. There was
also
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 a 7% difference between
India
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 and Japan in industrial
water
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usage
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. The
UK
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 allocated 5% of
water
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 for both domestic and industrial
purposes
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. Shifting to
agriculture
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, the
UK
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 dominated with 90% of
water
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 allocated to
this
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 purpose.
In contrast
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, China and
India
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 had lower figures, with the former at 3% and the latter at 8%. Japan used
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 the amount of
water
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 for
agriculture
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 compared to
Australia
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, which stood at 33%.
Canada
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 had the lowest agricultural
water
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usage
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, at 5%.

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "in contrast, while".
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words water, usage, purposes, australia, canada, uk, agriculture, india with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "compared" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "stood" was used 2 times.
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