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People believe that these days there is a general increase in anti-social behaviour and lack of respect for others. What might have caused this? How to improve this?

#people #behaviour #lack #respect
Nowadays,
majority
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 of people prefer to stay alone in their free time, especially the teenagers.
This
 is mainly
due to
 nuclear families and modern technology.
However
, there are several possible ways to mitigate
this
 issue
such
 as
indulge
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 them
into
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in
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 physical activities and more involvement of parents.
This
 essay will analyse both causes in detail and provide some solutions to solve
this
 problem.
To begin
 with, the foremost reason
of
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for
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this
 situation is,
that
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the
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 overgrowing trend of nuclear families.
As a result
, most
of
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individuals have to live alone which affects their mental
as well as
 social health.
For example
, in
this
single family
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 trend, people don't have enough pace to talk with each other which makes them harsh towards
other
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others
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.
According to
 an American survey, 80% of
public
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the public
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are
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is
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 suffering from anti-social behaviour
such
 as
bulling
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bullying
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 because of no teaching.
Secondly
, the overuse of modern technology is
also
 playing a crucial role in
this
 scenario.
This
 means, that they are not focusing on communication skills,
moral
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or moral
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 values which
is
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are
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 important to show some responsibilities towards others
such
 as respect etc. To illustrate,
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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