The table and charts below give information on the police budget for 2017 and 2018 in one area of Britain. The table shows where the money came from and the charts show how it was distributed. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
The table and
charts
illustrates
facts on the Change the verb form
illustrate
income
and outcome of police in United
Kingdom in 2017 and Correct article usage
the United
following
year in millions of pounds . The table displays the way Correct article usage
the following
of
Change preposition
apply
money
come
from and Correct subject-verb agreement
comes
charts
visualize how they spent
their Wrong verb form
spend
income
in
each year. Change preposition
apply
According to
the table, national government, local taxes and other sources such
as grants are the main income
sources of revenue. The national government has contributed huge
part of the budget. When considering Correct article usage
a huge
charts
, Correct article usage
the charts
the
huge amount of Correct article usage
a
money
has
distributed for salaries Verb problem
is
while
rest
of them are Correct article usage
the rest
spending
Wrong verb form
spent
for
technology and building and transport. In 2017, Change preposition
on
national
government Add an article
the national
has given
around 176 and it has increased Wrong verb form
gave
nearly
178 in 2018. The second most Change preposition
by nearly
income
is from taxes and it slightly
over 100 in 2018 Add a missing verb
was slightly
although
it was 92.2 in 2017. The other sources such
as grants gave 38 and 38.5 respectively in 2017 and 2018. When considering charts
, in 2017 three quarts from
Change preposition
of
fourth
Correct article usage
the fourth
have
spent Verb problem
were
for
officers and staff salaries though it was downwards to 69% in 2018. The Change preposition
on
money
for technology has increased by 6% up to 14% in 2018. However
, in both years, money
distribution for buildings and transport are same and it was 17% from
total expenditureChange preposition
of
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