Because of traffic and housing problems in the cities, the government encourages businesses to move to the rural ares. Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

Traffic and housing issues in the urban regions

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made authorities

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entreat companies to shift to the

coutry sides

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countryside

. I believe the benefits to

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more than the drawbacks which will be elaborated

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the forthcoming paragraphs.

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commence with, there is a huge influx in the

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big cities since every individual wants to live in

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place in search of better jobs and to engage in diverse trading thereby causing congestion in the towns.

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of the people live the villages and small communities

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the

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urban areas and some lack places to lay their heads

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inadequate housing and its affordability.

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the fumes from the cars are

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resulting in some serious health challenges

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as respiratory diseases, lung

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cancer

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, malaria from mosquito bites from those without proper accommodations just mention a few.

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is a huge problem for

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and the growth of a nation.

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, in

Ghana

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it has been reported in the

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conducted population and Housing Census in 2020 that about 70% of the total population of the country live in a crag being the

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capital of the Country and almost 45% of these people lack good sleep.

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, if companies and

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business

ate sites in the rural towns, much more

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development will be brought to these places, people will get to do and take care of themselves and their

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,

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will be harnessed since

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are individuals in the countryside with great skills but lack the proper channel to exhibit them. Again, there

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be decongestions in the big towns and pressure on the few amenities and facilities will be

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curtailed

as well as

wastage of resources will be reduced.

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MacDan Group of companies has now

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a salt mining and producing factory in Ada of the greater Accra region of Ghana has seen most of the citizens not only mining the sail and salt to be taken

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the cities of production but is is produced in town creating a lot of job avenue for the locals and development to the town.

To conclude

, I agree with the government's suggestion for factories and businesses to move to the outskirts of the country

due to

transport jams and housing challenges which I think has more good than bad.