Because of traffic and housing problems in the cities, the government encourages businesses to move to the rural areas. Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

Traffic and housing issues in the urban regions have made authorities entreat companies to shift to the countryside. I believe the benefits to

this

are more than the drawbacks which will be elaborated on in the forthcoming paragraphs. To commence with, there is a huge influx in the big cities since every individual wants to live in

this

place in search of better jobs and to engage in diverse trading thereby causing congestion in the towns. A lot of the people live the villages and small communities in urban areas and some lack places to lay their heads

due to

inadequate housing and its affordability.

Also

, the fumes from the cars are

also

resulting in some serious health challenges

such

as respiratory diseases, lung cancer, malaria from mosquito bites from those without proper accommodations just

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a few.

This

trend is a huge problem for governments and the growth of a nation.

For instance

, in Ghana, it has been reported in the

last

conducted population and Housing Census in 2020 that about 70% of the total population of the country live in a crag being the capital of the Country and almost 45% of these people lack good sleep.

Also

, if companies and

business

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businesses

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ate sites in the rural towns, much more development

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be brought to these places, people

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get to do and take care of themselves and their dependents, and talents

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be harnessed since there are individuals in the countryside with great skills but lack the proper channel to exhibit them. Again, there will be decongestions in the big towns and pressure on the few amenities and facilities will be curtailed

as well

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wastage of resources will be reduced.

For example

MacDan Group of companies has now set up a salt mining and producing factory in Ada of the greater Accra region of Ghana has seen most of the citizens not only mining the sail and salt to be taken

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the cities of production but

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produced in town creating a lot of job avenue for the locals and development to the town.

To conclude

, I agree with the government's suggestion for factories and businesses to move to the outskirts of the country

due to

transport jams and housing challenges which I think has more good than bad.