The charts below show what UK graduate and postgraduate students who did not go into full-time work did after leaving college in 2008. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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graduate
and postgraduate Use synonyms
students
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study after they leave Linking Words
college
. They continue to pursue education either outside the country or inside. There are Use synonyms
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graduates and postgraduates is part-time Use synonyms
work
. After completing Use synonyms
college
which mainly taught theoretical knowledge, graduates and postgraduates are often looking for real-life working experience, and one of the common ways is through part-time Use synonyms
work
. As for the third choice, some of the Use synonyms
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