The charts below show what UK graduate and postgraduate students who did not go into full-time work did after leaving college in 2008. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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“Everyone will eventually have their own path and timing”.

This

applies to

graduate

and postgraduate

students

who have different interests and choices after they leave

college

.

This

is

also

supported by the fact that not all of the

UK

graduate

and postgraduate

students

go into full-time

work

after leaving

college

. The charts in 2008 show that most of the

UK

graduate

and postgraduate

students

go into

further

study after they leave

college

. They continue to pursue education either outside the country or inside. There are

also

many possible reasons why most of them choose to study

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to explore the field they’re passionate about and

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more knowledge in the field of what they are really interested in. The second choice of destination for both

UK

graduates and postgraduates is part-time

work

. After completing

college

which mainly taught theoretical knowledge, graduates and postgraduates are often looking for real-life working experience, and one of the common ways is through part-time

work

. As for the third choice, some of the

graduate

and postgraduate

students

are still unemployed.

Lastly

, the least destination of

UK

graduate

and postgraduate

students

is voluntary

work

. The main possible reason why could be because it’s an unpaid job, meanwhile

graduate

and postgraduate

students

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the age of wanting to get an incentive after they complete their studies.