Some people support the idea of imposing taxes of fossil fuels (oil, coal and gas) in order to reduce energy consumption, other disagree with this point Consider the debate and its arguments and came to your own conclusions.
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Fossil
fuels
are essential
part of life, utilization of Add an article
an essential
energy
is
increased Verb problem
has
therefore
some individuals think that government
should levy Correct article usage
the government
for
Change preposition
apply
energy
, such
as oil, coal as well
as
gas Correct word choice
and
as a result
dwindle of consumption
. I will judge now and I provide my own conclusion.
Arguably, there could be reasons why rocketing
price of Add an article
the rocketing
energy
lead
to lower Correct subject-verb agreement
leads
consumption
and lower emissions. They point to evidence from eclectic countries
, for instance
, Sweden, where to be
the Verb problem
apply
appear
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apply
this
case after that all population of this
country are adjusted to this
circumstance. Moreover
, if the state
able to legislate fuel taxation for inhabitants, people try to use renewable Add a verb
state is
state was
energy
such
as solar power or localized biofuel reactors. To the supports
of Replace the word
supporters
this
idea, these benefits are convincing. Notwithstanding shortage
of population in some Correct article usage
the shortage
countries
, they have to load some charge to people for consumption
energy
because First world countries
suffer from the lack of energy
, by which I mean that developed countries
have got too
purchase Correct your spelling
to
fuels
via that kind of country. As evidence
China Add a comma
evidence,
require
a large proportion of Change the verb form
requires
energy
.
Foremost among other challenge
appear to be more Fix the agreement mistake
challenges
issue
of the world condition. Fix the agreement mistake
issues
Initially
, opponents of fuel tax are able to cite evidence from other countries
(subsuming France and German
) where higher Replace the word
Germany
charge
apparently not Fix the agreement mistake
charges
reduced
Wrong verb form
reduce
of
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apply
consumption
. In these case
, more and more people exploit Fix the agreement mistake
cases
fuels
in spite of increasing cost
. Fix the agreement mistake
costs
Furthermore
, if the state control
Correct subject-verb agreement
controls
market
of Correct article usage
the market
fuels
, they
can cease Correct pronoun usage
it
waste
of Correct article usage
the waste
energy
. For example
, the USA consistently manage inhabitant of consumption
, this
way is efficiency
not only Replace the word
efficient
The
USA but Change preposition
for The
also
for the world.
In a nutshell, I would tend to side with the opponents of fuel taxation. It seems to be unreasonable to force vulnerable consumers to pay more for a commodity which is essential to them, without a real infrastructure for renewable energy
being in place.Submitted by @ur_davrik
on
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