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average percentages of sodium, saturated fats and added sugars in typical meals consumed in the USA

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The pie charts display information about average percentages of unhealthy nutrition contained in breakfast, lunch, dinner, and snacks in the USA. Ingredients
such
 as
sodium
, processed
sugar
, and saturated fat were proven to be unhealthy if consumed on a daily basis. In general, consumers gained
most
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 fat and
sodium
 from their dinner,
while
sugar
 was highly received from snacks. From the start of the day, only by eating breakfast would obtain around 15%
from
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sodium
, fat, and
sugar
 respectively. The numbers of mentioned nutrition soared up
while
 taking a work or school lunch. As shown in the diagram, lunch foods contained large sums of
sodium
 and saturated fat
by
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nearly 30% each,
while
 the
sugar
 percentage was almost 20%. The highest amount of
sodium
 is retained from consuming dinner meals by more than 40%. People
also
 gained more fat than other meals by more than one-third of
overall
 intakes, followed by
sugar
 that was far below the previous two ingredients.
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 number of sweet condiments is added
into
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 light meals by almost half of the charts, followed by saturated fat (21%) and
sodium
 (14%).
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