The chart shows the percentage of households in owned and rented accommodation in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011

The chart shows the percentage of households in owned and rented accommodation in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011
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the
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compression
of buying or renting houses
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in
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England and
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Wales
from 1918 to 201.
1918
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the rented households was raised
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81
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leveled
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between
1939
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1953. From 196
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1981
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dramaticly droped
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dramatically dropped to
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35
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accommodation
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stayed
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the same until 201.
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20l1 there was a slight increase
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rented households and
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was up
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38%. The same
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the owned ones
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raise from %12
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1918 t01953.
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the percentage.
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starts
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up
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69%
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191.
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201
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there was a decline
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the owned accommodation and it was 62%.
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the rented and owned households
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raised and
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dropped through
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1918
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201. The was a year that
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were the same
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precharge
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percentage
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was 1971
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Linking words: Add some linking words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words ni, ti, ot with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "droped" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • ownership
  • tenancy
  • trend
  • fluctuation
  • proportion
  • residence
  • dwelling
  • shift
  • transition
  • migration
  • fluctuate
  • stabilize
  • rise
  • fall
  • increase
  • decrease
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