The chart shows the percentage of households in owned and rented accommodation in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011

The chart shows the percentage of households in owned and rented accommodation in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011
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comprssion
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compression

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of buying or renting houses
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England and
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Wales

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from 1918 to 201.
1918
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In 1918

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the rented households was raised
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by about

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81
percentage
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per cent

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Then
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leveled
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of
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off

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betwen
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1939
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ot
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to

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1953. From 196
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to

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1981
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ti
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it

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dramaticly droped
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dramatically dropped to

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ot
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35
percentage
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This
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accommodation
stated
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stayed

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the same until 201.
nI
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20l1 there was a slight increase
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in

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rented households and
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ti
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it

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was up
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ot
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to

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38%. The same
yeas
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year

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the owned ones
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has
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raise from %12
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ot
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to

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ni
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1918 t01953.
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nI
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1939
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ot
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to

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1953
hte
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he
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was a graduate stade
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ni
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in

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the percentage.
Then
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ti
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it

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starts
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ot
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to

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leveled
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level

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up
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ot
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to

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nI
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191.
At
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From

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201
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ot
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to
or

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201
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201,

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there was a decline
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ni
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in

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the owned accommodation and it was 62%.
Genaraly
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Generally

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, both
of
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apply

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the rented and owned households
has
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have

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raised and
droped throug
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dropped through

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the years
from
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apply

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1918
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ot
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to

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201. The was a year that
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they
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the
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they

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were the same
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precharge
prectarge
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percentage

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and
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it
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ti
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it

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was 1971
which
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when

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Linking words: Add some linking words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words ni, ti, ot with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "droped" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • ownership
  • tenancy
  • trend
  • fluctuation
  • proportion
  • residence
  • dwelling
  • shift
  • transition
  • migration
  • fluctuate
  • stabilize
  • rise
  • fall
  • increase
  • decrease
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