You were sent by your company to attend a meeting in another country, but you are not happy with the hotel your organizer booked for you. Write a letter to your organizer about - -the meeting you attended - your complaint about the hotel - what would you like the organizer to do about it?

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Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing

this

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letter with the intent of expressing my grave concerns towards my

last

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visit

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Blue Farms

Hotel

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in Canada. Generally, my company B.C Ltd. book their all tours and travel from your organization because of the great services you provided us

from

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over

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the

last

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5 years.

However

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this

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time, I am very disappointed by

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arrangement which you made on 22nd September at the

hotel

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. I had

extremely

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an extremely

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important meeting at Blue Farms, and it didn’t go well

due to

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several reasons. First of all, No one was there to assist

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apply

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me at

reception

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the reception

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area and took me around an hour to

check-in

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check in

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the

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at the

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hotel

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room

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the room

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wasn’t

tidy

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as tidy

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and comfy as expected.

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, their WIFI connection was fluctuating as I

was

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failed to connect the projector in the meeting room to present the PowerPoint presentation. After numerous calls

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help

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the help

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desk, no one from the staff showed up to help us and my agenda for the meeting wasn’t successful. Now, I want, you should admonish your staff, who didn’t check the

hotel

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reviews before booking.

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, I need an apology letter from your company about their careless behaviour

otherwise

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, I talked with my manager, we are planning to end up our contract with your company, If we don’t receive the letter

that

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apply

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it will not happen

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again. Hope to receive

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prompt response. Yours truly, John

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The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

Best regards,
Warm wishes,

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

235 words

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You were sent by your company to attend a meeting in another country, but you are not happy with the hotel your organizer booked for you. Write a letter to your organizer about - -the meeting you attended - your complaint about the hotel - what would you like the organizer to do about it?

The Closing

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Some people say cultural traditions are destroyed when they are used as money- making attractions aimed at tourists. Others say this is the only way to save such traditions. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Whether or not someone achieves their aims is mostly by a question of luck. To what extent do you agree or not agree?

Now a alot of people in college are doing academic study. We should encourge them to learn vocational skill ( like plumbers and electricity). Do you agree or disagree.?

Overpopulation of urban areas has led to numerous problems. Identify one or two serious ones and suggest ways that governments and individuals can tackle these problems.