The bar charts below show the percentages of men and women in employment in three countries in 2005 and 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar charts below
illustrates
information about the fraction of men and Change the verb form
illustrate
women
in career
in Canada, south Add an article
a career
korea
and Change the capitalization
Korea
sweden
in 2005 and 2015.
Change the capitalization
Sweden
According to
information
provided, we can see that the number of male Correct article usage
the information
workers
are higher than women
in 2005 and 2015. However
, women
employment in 2005 Change noun form
women's
were
very low. Correct subject-verb agreement
was
In contrast
, in 2015 the percantage
Correct your spelling
percentage
rises
way Wrong verb form
rose
heigher
particularly in Canada.
If we look closely, we notice that in 2005 Correct your spelling
higher
Canada
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Canada's
women
workers
were 40% and in 2015 it increases
to 50%. Wrong verb form
increased
Similarly
, Male workers
were 60% in 2005 and the fraction slightly rises to 70%. In contrast
, in sweden
male Change the capitalization
Sweden
workers
were 80% in 2005 and it decreases
to 70% in 2015. Wrong verb form
decreased
While
sweden
Change the capitalization
Sweden
women
workers
were almost 45% in 2005 and it increases
almost to 50% in 2015. Meanwhile, South Wrong verb form
increased
korea
rate of Change the capitalization
Korea
employmnet
Correct your spelling
employment
were
almost the same in both years.
To summarize, the bar chart clearly Change the verb form
was
show
that Change the verb form
shows
women
in different countries employment are less than men.Submitted by mneeraaljalahma on
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