The chart shows how many prcentages of students who could speak in some languages with english in Britain in 2000.

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it is clear that

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British students who were able to speak in

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made up the largest proportion

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others who knew two other languages and only

german

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accounted for the least share.

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it is

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worth mentioning that the difference between the biggest and the smallest figures was significant. Looking at the graph in detail, the figure for those who could speak

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only

spanish

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was by far higher than that of other students, accounting for 30%. The second place in the list was recorded by those who knew only

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, with 5% being higher than

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the proportion

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of students who were capable of speaking in another language and only

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. Those who were able to communicate with people in two other languages solely

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formed an equal 10

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during the given period.

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