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The chart below shows the total numbers of minutes (in billions) of telephone calls in the UK, divided into three categories from 1995 to 2002. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the total numbers of minutes (in billions) of telephone calls in the UK, divided into three categories from 1995 to 2002. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The graph gives information about the total
number
 of telephone calls in three different categories: Local-fixed
line
, National and international-fixed
line
 and Mobiles between 1995 and 2002 in the UK.
Overall
, it can be seen that the total
number
 of mobiles and national and international-fixed
line
call
Fix the agreement mistake
calls
show examples
 show
increasing
Correct article usage
an increasing
show examples
trend
,
while
 local-fixed
line
 calls
see
Verb problem
show
show examples
 a decline in
trend
. In 1995, Local-fixed
line
 calls
was
Change the verb form
were
show examples
 the most popular calls made in the UK at over 70
billion
minutes
.
This
 call type continues to become the most used by people and reached its peak in 1990 with 90
billion
minutes
. After 1999,
This
trend
decline
Wrong verb form
declined
show examples
 over time with only just over 70
billion
minutes
 in 2022.
In
Change preposition
On
show examples
 the other hand, National and International fixed
line
 and mobile calls show a positive
trend
 during the period. In 1995, national and international calls made a total
number
 of telephone calls at just below 40
billion
minutes
.
This
Correct determiner usage
These
show examples
 numbers grow steadily over time and reach slightly over 60
billion
minutes
 in 2022.
Furthermore
, Mobile
call
Fix the agreement mistake
calls
show examples
 made a significant growth compared to
other type
Change the wording
another type
other types
show examples
. In 1995, the total
number
 of
minutes
 made by mobile
only
Add a missing verb
was only
show examples
at
Change preposition
apply
show examples
4
bilion
Correct your spelling
billion
minutes
.
This
number
 rose sharply with over 40
billion
minutes
 in 2022.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words number, line, trend, billion, minutes with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "show" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "decline" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 2 times.
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