You recenly received a letter from your bank that should have contain a new credit card. Unfortunately, the card was not in the letter. Write a letter to your bank manager. In your letter: -Explain what has happened. -Suggest the card could be cancelled for security reasons. -Ask when the new credit card can be sent to you.

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to raise a security issue regarding the classified letter I received

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Friday. I am afraid the new credit

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, that was supposed to be inside an envelope of the letter, is missing. First of all, as soon as received your post, I opened it and checked for a new

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. Unfortunately, the

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was not there.

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, I checked my mailbox again, believing that there could be another letter for

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, but I could not find any other envelope there.

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, I would like to raise a request to cancel the missing credit

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that ends with digits 6474 for security reasons.

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, it would be good if you could place an order for a new credit

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on my behalf.

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, I will be on vacation till the 30th of October. So I would like to request you to dispatch

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delivery on or

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Monday. I hope you will take quick action on my issue. I look forward to receiving a prompt reply! Yours faithfully, Ravindra Rajole

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

179 words

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Dear [Bank Manager's Name]
credit card
bank statement
security
unauthorized access
inconvenience
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address
situation
concern
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process
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