The line graph shows the proportion of students aged 18-25 studying in the universities of Singapore, Malaysia, Philippines and Thailand from 1961 and 2011. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line graph illustrates the
percantage
of 18-25 aged Correct your spelling
percentage
students
in the universities
of Singapore, Malaysia, Philippines
, and Thailand between 1961 and 2011.
Overall
, 18-25 year olds students
in universities
increased throught
the period. Correct your spelling
throughout
through
While
Thailand's universities
has
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have
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the
percantege
of Correct your spelling
percentage
students
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of
Philippines
universities
expreinced
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experienced
lowest
proportion.
Between 1961 and 1991, Thailand's Change the article
the lowest
universities
saw fluctations
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proportion
of 18-25 ages Add an article
the proportion
a proportion
students
(25%). Similarly
, Singapore's universities
showed same
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the same
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oscillation
in
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an
upward
trend. After 1991, Add an article
an upward
the upward
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involvement
to
Singapore's Change preposition
in
universities
from these ages rose sharply and reached to highest percantege
(almost 42%).
From 1961 to 1991, young proportions of Correct your spelling
percentage
students
whose
went to Correct pronoun usage
who
universities
from Malaysia and Philippines
rose from nearly 2% and 7% to 15%, respectively. After that year, proportions
in Correct article usage
the proportions
Malaysia
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Malaysian universities
Universities
stayed same
, Correct article usage
the same
while
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the Philippines
Philippines
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Philippine's
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