The graghic below illustrates the amount of changes in the share of international scholars among university graduates in diffrent Canadian provinces between 2001 and 2006.

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below illustrates the

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of changes in the share of international scholars among university graduates in

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Canadian provinces between 2001 and 2006. Between 2001 and 2006,the former has the

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percentage of international students

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with 2006. New Brunswick has been the highest

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Ontario has been the lowest in both 2001 and 2006.

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Columbia and Nova Scotia were really close to New Brunswick in 2006,but they were lower by 0,5-2%. Newfoundland and Labrador and Manitoba's

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were the same in both 2001 and 2006. In 2001 the same situation happened with Alberta and British Columbia. All Canadian provinces have passed 5% of international students in 2006,meanwhile only 3 out of 8 have passed in 2001. In the

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illustrates that at the start of

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' the number of international scholars

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been increasing through the years.