A friend you made while you studying abroad has writen to ask you help finding a in your country. You have heard about a job in a local company thd might be suitable for himm/her. Write a letter to this your letter • tell your friend about the job and what sort of work it involves • say why you think the job would be suitaue for him/her • explain how to apply gor the job

#friend #writen #country #job #company #thd #himm #sort #work #suitaue #gor

Dear Sania, I hope that you are

alright

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How's

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things going on? I am pleased to say about a new vacancy in Pakistan. Since I found

this

job I am so excited to tell you more about

this

opportunity that you really want.

This

is a hotel Management company in my area and they are hiring experienced employees for numerous posts.

Besides

this

, they are

also

hiring fresh people to join

this

group

for

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temporary

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a temporary

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basis. When we had studied in

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the UK

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, you told me to join a company which has hired part-time staff. So I

reasarch

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research

one position which is

favorable

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for you is

Software

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a Software

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developer.

Furthermore

, It's important to understand

this

job will give you some experience for the future and

helps

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help

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you to develop more skills. They are

also

giving some benefits

for

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instance, yearly bonuses and pick and drop facilities. I think

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apply

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this

position is suitable for you. I

am recommends

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you that

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apply

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consider

this

job so you can apply as soon as possible. The hotel website is available to put your

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on the link and get a vacancy. I am looking forward to hearing from you soon. Good Luck!

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The Closing

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Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

Best regards,
Warm wishes,

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5Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
14Grammar mistakes
 

7 paragraphs

197 words

4.00

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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