The graph below shows the consumption of fish and some different kinds of meat in a European country between 1979 and 2004. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the consumption of fish and some different kinds of meat in a European country between 1979 and 2004.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph compares the
consumption
of fish, chicken,
beef
, and lamb in a European country from 1979 to 2004, measured in
grams
.
Overall
,
it is clear that
the proportion of people eating
beef
and lamb experienced an escalated trend,
whereas
the individuals who consume chicken and fish encountered a plunge. As for the number of people consuming lamb accounted for 150
grams
per human per week before showing a downtrend of approximately 70
grams
per human per week in 2004.
Likewise
, the
people
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eating
beef
who have the same scheme that extended declined in 2004 after oscillating between 1979 and 1999;
however
,
hicken
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chicken
and
beef
consumption
have crossed
line
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the line
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by the nearly 1989.
Nonetheless
, chicken
consumption
appeared sequentially rate and reached its peak in 2004 at just beneath 250
grams
per individual.
By contrast
, in the same year, fish
consumption
experienced plateau movements that were well under 50
grams
per person in a week.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words consumption, beef, grams with synonyms.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • consumption
  • metric tons
  • fluctuations
  • upward/downward trend
  • stabilize
  • peak
  • trough
  • overtake
  • steady decline/increase
  • sustainable
  • dietary habits
  • preferences
  • health consciousness
  • per capita
  • poultry
  • veal
  • stagnant
  • gradual
  • surpass
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