You are about to go on vacation for a month. A friend from another town will come and stay in your apartment. Writ a letter to this friend. In your letter explain where your friend can get the keys to the apartment give your friend some instruction about using your apartment recommend some places to go
Dear John
I hope to find
your
well. I am writing Correct pronoun usage
you
this
letter to you for
Change preposition
to
explanation
some information that you will needReplace the word
explain
them
. I am going to go to Nova City Correct pronoun usage
apply
on
Change preposition
apply
this
weekend, since you will arrive next Monday, I have to take keys
Correct article usage
the keys
of
my Change preposition
to
apartment
to my neighbor
, who lives next to me. She is an old and kind woman Change the spelling
neighbour
also
will consist
you for having the best accommodation in my Verb problem
thank
apartment
if you need the
more information.
There are three keys, the biggest of them is Correct article usage
apply
indoor
door key Correct article usage
the indoor
and
the smallest Correct word choice
apply
of
Change preposition
apply
them
is Correct pronoun usage
apply
Warehouse
key, Correct article usage
the Warehouse
finally
the latest key is the apartment
key.
Also
, if you prefer to utilize the
my desk work for your laptop, you should open Remove the article
apply
desk
drawer and put up the power tee. Add an article
a desk
the desk
Besides
, before use
to Wrong verb form
using
oven
you must turn on individual matter.
Add a comma
oven,
Finally
, my apartment
has
so far from Verb problem
is
city
centre, but there are a few main shops near it. So, you can purchase Add an article
the city
your
necessary things that you need them. Change the pronoun
the
Furthermore
, if you tend to go to city
Add an article
the city
center
, you should take Change the spelling
centre
subway
. The subway station is on the street next to Add an article
the subway
the
my Remove the article
apply
apartment
. I forgot
mention to you, there is a traditional restaurant that has a variety of delicious local cuisine in the Add the particle
forgot to
maine
boulevard of my neighbourhood.
I hope Correct your spelling
main
Maine
this suggestions
help you and you spend the most effective time here.
lovely
SouriChange the determiner
this suggestion
these suggestions
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The Closing
The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.
Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.
Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)
- Yours faithfully,
Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)
- Yours sincerely,
Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)
- Best regards,
- Warm wishes,