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You are about to go on vacation for a month. A friend from another town will come and stay in your apartment. Writ a letter to this friend. In your letter explain where your friend can get the keys to the apartment give your friend some instruction about using your apartment recommend some places to go

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Dear John I hope to find
your
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you
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 well. I am writing
this
 letter to you
for
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to
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explanation
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 some information that you will need
them
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. I am going to go to Nova City
on
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this
 weekend, since you will arrive next Monday, I have to take
keys
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the keys
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of
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to
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 my
apartment
 to my
neighbor
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neighbour
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, who lives next to me. She is an old and kind woman
also
 will
consist
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thank
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 you for having the best accommodation in my
apartment
 if you need
the
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more information. There are three keys, the biggest of them is
indoor
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the indoor
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 door key
and
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the smallest
of
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them
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is
Warehouse
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the Warehouse
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 key,
finally
 the latest key is the
apartment
 key.
Also
, if you prefer to utilize
the
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my desk work for your laptop, you should open
desk
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a desk
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 drawer and put up the power tee.
Besides
, before
use
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using
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 to
oven
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 you must turn on individual matter.
Finally
, my
apartment
has
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 so far from
city
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the city
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 centre, but there are a few main shops near it. So, you can purchase
your
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 necessary things that you need them.
Furthermore
, if you tend to go to
city
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center
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, you should take
subway
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the subway
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. The subway station is on the street next to
the
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my
apartment
. I
forgot
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 mention to you, there is a traditional restaurant that has a variety of delicious local cuisine in the
maine
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main
Maine
 boulevard of my neighbourhood. I hope
this suggestions
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 help you and you spend the most effective time here. lovely Souri
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The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

  • Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

  • Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

  • Best regards,
  • Warm wishes,

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