The line graph illustrates the process of food consumption in China.

The line graph illustrates the process of food

consumption

Use synonyms

in China. We can see that the highest consumed food is

fish

Use synonyms

, compared to

meat

Use synonyms

.

Also

Linking Words

that

Correct word choice

apply

show examples

at

first

Add a comma

first,

show examples

the salt production was in the middle of the two. First of all, the number of consumers of

fish

Use synonyms

products amounted to

600people

Correct your spelling

600 people

in 1985 ,

then

Linking Words

this

Linking Words

figure grew rapidly for

5years

Correct your spelling

5 years

and returned to

it’s

Replace the word

its

show examples

place until 1995.After that, between 1995 and 2010 the

consumption

Use synonyms

of

fish

Use synonyms

in China increased by almost 800 compared to salt and

meat

Use synonyms

.

Although

Linking Words

salt

consumption

Use synonyms

was 500 in 1985 ,it was 200 in 2010 equating with

meat

Use synonyms

as a result

Linking Words

of a gradual fall.And

meat

Use synonyms

products

for

Change preposition

apply

show examples

between 1985 and 2010 doubled their previous number

reached

Wrong verb form

reaching

show examples

200. As can be from

graph

Add an article

the graph

a graph

show examples

, there was only

rise

Correct article usage

a rise

show examples

in

meat

Use synonyms

and

fish

Use synonyms

consumption

Use synonyms

.