The table and charts below give information on the police budget for 2017 and 2018 in one area of Britain. The table shows where the money came from and the charts show how it was distributed. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
The given table and pie charts provide information on how much budget
that
Britain police Correct determiner usage
the
one
area received in 2017 and 2018 and how it was allocated.
Correct pronoun usage
apply
Overall
, the amount of money that came all
sources increased. Change preposition
from all
While
other units experienced either reduction or addition, building
was the only one that received stable funding from Add an article
the building
year
to year
.
To begin
with, the total budget in 2017 was 304.7m. This
money were
received from National Government (175.5m), Locat Taxes (91.2m), and other sources Change the verb form
was
such
as grants (38m). The number increased in the following year
to 318.6m. The total Increased in the following year
by 13.9m and were
collected from National Government (177.8), Local Taxes (102.3m), and other sources Change the verb form
was
such
as grants (38.5m).
The money allocation for buildings and transport were
17% in both 2017 and 2018. Change the verb form
was
In
Change preposition
On
one
hand, Correct article usage
the one
officers
and staff's salaries which were 75% in 2017 cut Change noun form
officers'
officer's
ooff
in 2018 by 6%. Correct your spelling
off
In
Change preposition
On
contrary
, technology which Correct article usage
the contrary
were
distributed withChange the verb form
was
8
% budget received Correct article usage
an 8
additional
6% in the following Correct article usage
an additional
year
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 78%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words year, m with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "give" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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