The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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further

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development plan

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Norbiton

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the Norbiton

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industrial area.

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, Because of the land use variation, the majority of the

factory

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in another location. And

this

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region will

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a hostel areas

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. At present, Norbition industrial areas

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a ring

road

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the middle, with

mutiable

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mutable

suitable

factory

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around it.

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the east side of

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loop

road

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road

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parelled

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parallel

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road

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connect

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to another city, which

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lot of

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factory

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factories

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among

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the roadside.

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the North of the

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area

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, there is a huge

rivier

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river

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dividing

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the farmland and the town. In

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further

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development, we will

persent

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present

three main features,

convenious

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convenient

traffic, more hostel,

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basically

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infrastructure

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of uptown. For traffic, there will be a bridge

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across

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river

to farmland,

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pathways

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to the

North-West

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of the center and,

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road

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loop

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road

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, all of the

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factory

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into

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housing, and the new

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. For infrastructure, There will be a shops and medical centre built in the South West and South East of the loop

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in the

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. And a Playground in the pathways from the parelled

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and a school a the end of it.

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also, further".

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Introduction: The introduction is missing.

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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.

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Basic structure: Change the first paragraph.

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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.

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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words factory, road with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the first paragraph.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.

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2
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

215 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

industrial area
planned future development
factories
warehouses
railway line
shopping center
residential buildings
college
mixed-use zone
commercial
residential
educational
green spaces
pedestrian walkways
housing
community
retail services
revitalize
quality of life
vibrant
sustainable

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The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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Many people who live in urban areas are suffering increasingly from stress. what do you think are the causes of this problem and what measures could be taken to reduce it ?