The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Today, I will introduce

further

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development plan

of

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for

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Norbiton

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the Norbiton

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industrial area.

Overall

, Because of the land use variation, the majority of the

factory

will

replace

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in another location. And

this

region will

be construct

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as

a hostel areas

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a hostel area

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. At present, Norbition industrial areas

has

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have

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a ring

road

at

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in

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the middle, with

mutiable

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mutable

suitable

factory

around it.

At

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On

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the east side of

this

loop

road

, there is a straight

road

parelled

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parallel

parcelled

with the

road

connect

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to another city, which

also

a

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lot of

factory

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factories

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among

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on

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the roadside.

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In

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the North of the

areas

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area

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, there is a huge

rivier

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river

divide

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dividing

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the farmland and the town. In

further

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development, we will

persent

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present

three main features,

convenious

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convenient

traffic, more hostel,

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and basically

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basically

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infrastructure

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the infrastructure

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of uptown. For traffic, there will be a bridge

accross

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across

the

rivier

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river

to farmland,

also

a

pathways

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pathway

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to the

North-West

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northwest

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of the center and,

Inlet

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the Inlet

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T-

road

will

be replace

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be replaced

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by

loop

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a loop

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road

. For

hostel

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the hostel

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, all of the

factory

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factories

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will be

replace

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replaced

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into

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with

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housing, and the new

road

which we just

mentions

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mentioned

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will

surrounding

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with

house

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houses

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. For infrastructure, There will be a shops and medical centre built in the South West and South East of the loop

road

in the

center

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. And a Playground in the pathways from the parelled

road

and a school a the end of it.