The charts below show the main reasons for study among students of different age groups and the amount of support they received from employers. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make companies where relevant.
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The two bar graphs illustrate the correlation between various ages students' reasons for studying and the number of
employees
that support the student 's claims.
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Overall
, Linking Words
employees
support students under the Use synonyms
age
of 16 most Use synonyms
while
individuals from the Linking Words
age
Use synonyms
30
- 39 receive the least amount of help.
As seen in the bar graphs, the two Change preposition
of 30
age
groups that gain the most encouragement from adult workers are students under 16 and 19. Pupils younger than 16 received 60 out of 70 Use synonyms
employees
that are willing to provide aid Use synonyms
while
learners at the Linking Words
age
of 16 to 19 obtained help from 50 out of 70 adult Use synonyms
employees
.
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On the contrary
, the two Linking Words
age
groups that received the least amount of support by workers are groups from 30 to 39 and 40 to 49. Individuals aged 30 to 39 only acquire approximately 33 out of 70 workers' help Use synonyms
while
individuals aged from 40 to 49 received a slightly higher amount of help which is 38 out of 40.Linking Words
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