You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The chart below shows the different levels of post-school qualifications in Australia and the proportion of men and women who held them in 1999. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
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The bar chart illustrates the various types of educational qualification in Australia in 1999 broken down by gender.
Overall
, it is evident that there was a great disparity in education between men and female.
What is striking the most looking
at the data is the fact that the majority of higher academic qualifications were reached by Rephrase
when looking
males
. While
70 % and 55 % of women held an undergraduate diploma
and bachelor's degree, Postgraduate diploma
and Master's degree were only finished by 30 % and 40 %, respectively.
Whereas
males
earned higher academic certificaticates
more often, the majority of skilled vocational Correct your spelling
certificate cates
diploma
holders,,
which is the lowest certificate, Change the punctuation
apply
was
Correct subject-verb agreement
were
also
represented by men. Interestingly, 90 % finished school with this
type which is in stark contrast of
the predominance in the higher educational segment looking at 70 % of postgraduate Change preposition
to
diploma
and 60 % Master's Fix the agreement mistake
diplomas
degree
which were Fix the agreement mistake
degrees
hold
by them.
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held
conlucion
, Correct your spelling
conclusion
although
the majority of skilled vocation
Replace the word
vocational
diploma
holders were males
, it cannot be overstated that males
experienced a further
in-depth education compared to females in 1999.Submitted by nina-zimmer on
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Vocabulary: Replace the words males, diploma with synonyms.
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