You took your family to a nearby restaurant. You were disappointed with the meal and wish to complain to the manager. Write a letter to the manager of the restaurant. In the letter: explain why you were at the restaurant describe the problems write about the action you want the manager to take You do NOT need to write your own address. Begin your letter as: Dear Sir or Madam, You should write at least 150 words.

Dear Manager, I am
wiritng
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writing
this
to complain about the food that we ordered.
To begin
with, on the
ocassion
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occasion
of my sister's
birthday
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birthday,
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me
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I
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and my family visited your
reastaurant
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restaurant
to celebrate the event. After going
throug
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through
the
google
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reviews we ordered
Chicken
Biryani as
Main
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the Main
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course and
Chicken
Manchuria as the
appetizers
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appetizer
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.
Chicken
in the biryani smells like a
routen
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rotten
egg and
chicken
manchuria
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Manchuria
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is not even cooked .We complained the same to the staff and their response is not at all positive.We had
extremely
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bad ending day . I want you to refund the money and take appropriate action on the staff and
also
take enough measures to follow the food health and safety instructions. Will be waiting for your reply , yours sincerely,
vikram
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Vikram
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kallem
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killed
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • express disappointment
  • dining experience
  • service
  • inefficient
  • seated
  • order
  • food quality
  • expectations
  • menu
  • portion sizes
  • atmosphere
  • pleasant
  • address shortcomings
  • training
  • efficient
  • attentive
  • promptness
  • delivering food
  • flavors
  • presentation
  • descriptions
  • calm
  • relaxing
  • enhance
  • satisfied
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