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Work is being done on the street where you live. The noise is disturbing you. Write a letter of complaint to your local council. In your letter: -Introduce yourself. -Explain what the problem is. - Suggest solutions to the problem.

#work #street #noise #complaint #council #-introduce #-explain
Dear Sir/Madam,
This
 is to complain about the tremendous disturbance that we
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 experiencing for the past three days from
near by
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street repairs.The sounds are extremely annoying. I am
software
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 engineer, work
remotley
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remotely
 to look after my baby who is 1 year old.After the construction work began it became very hard for me to focus on the work and to attend the
bussiness
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business
 meetings. My little toddler
couldnt
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couldn't
 sleep during the
day time
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daytime
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 and
keeps
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 crying all
the
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day.All these days are
nightmare
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 for my family. I would like to
advice
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to
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you to
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 continue working on the weekends.We will take the vacation for 2 days .I believe
thi
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that
 will be a good idea . I
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 you will consider my problem. Yours sincerely,
vikram
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task achievement
Make sure to address all aspects of the task prompt, including introducing yourself, explaining the problem, and suggesting solutions. Your response is incomplete.
suitable writing tone
Adjust your writing style to be more formal and professional when addressing the local council. Avoid using personal anecdotes and emotions.
logical structure
Organize your ideas in separate paragraphs for clarity and coherence. Each paragraph should focus on a single main idea.
lexical resource
Use more appropriate and precise vocabulary to express your ideas. Avoid repetition and improve the overall vocabulary range.
grammatical range and accuracy
Pay attention to grammar and sentence structure to improve overall accuracy and readability.
task achievement
Provide specific solutions to address the noise problem, rather than requesting the construction to be done on weekends and taking a vacation.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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