Work is being done on the street where you live. The noise is disturbing you. Write a letter of complaint to your local council. In your letter: -Introduce yourself. -Explain what the problem is. - Suggest solutions to the problem.

#work #street #noise #complaint #council #-introduce #-explain

Dear Sir/Madam,

This

is to complain about the tremendous disturbance that we

are

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have been

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experiencing for the past three days from

near by

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nearby

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street repairs.The sounds are extremely annoying. I am

software

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a software

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engineer, work

remotley

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remotely

to look after my baby who is 1 year old.After the construction work began it became very hard for me to focus on the work and to attend the

bussiness

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business

meetings. My little toddler

couldnt

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couldn't

sleep during the

day time

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daytime

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and

keeps

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kept

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crying all

the

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apply

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day.All these days are

nightmare

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a nightmare

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for my family. I would like to

advice

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you to

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continue working on the weekends.We will take the vacation for 2 days .I believe

thi

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that

will be a good idea . I

Hope

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you will consider my problem. Yours sincerely,

vikram

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Vikram

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task achievement

Make sure to address all aspects of the task prompt, including introducing yourself, explaining the problem, and suggesting solutions. Your response is incomplete.

suitable writing tone

Adjust your writing style to be more formal and professional when addressing the local council. Avoid using personal anecdotes and emotions.

logical structure

Organize your ideas in separate paragraphs for clarity and coherence. Each paragraph should focus on a single main idea.

lexical resource

Use more appropriate and precise vocabulary to express your ideas. Avoid repetition and improve the overall vocabulary range.

grammatical range and accuracy

Pay attention to grammar and sentence structure to improve overall accuracy and readability.

task achievement

Provide specific solutions to address the noise problem, rather than requesting the construction to be done on weekends and taking a vacation.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
15Grammar mistakes
 

8 paragraphs

124 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

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