The bar chart below shows the top ten countries for the production and consumption in billion kWh of electricity in 2014. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.

The bar chart below shows the top ten countries for the production and consumption in billion kWh of electricity in 2014.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.
The given bar chart provides data on the amount of electricity generated and consumed by the 10
countries
in 2014.
It is clear that
there is a significant difference between China and the other nations in producing and consuming electrical power sources.
Also
, Only Germany had higher amounts of consuming
this
major energy upon generating it among the given
countries
.
According to
the chart, China was the biggest generator and consumer of electricity, at 5396 and 5322
billion
kWh
, respectively. The second highest producer and user was the United States, generating about 300
billion
kWh
more than using,
While
Korea. Rep. ranked
last
among other nations by average producing and consuming of about 480
billion
kWh
.
Also
, Russia Was the only nation that these two criteria were almost equal by a little more than 1000
billion
kWh
. The figures for four
countries
, India, Canada, France, and Brazil, were between the range of 450 and 870
billion
kWh
.
Also
, in all of these four
countries
, the production of electrical power was more than using it
whereas
, only in Germany, these figures were the opposite.
Furthermore
, Japan had a second rank among Asian
countries
by production of 963.2
billion
kWh
, and consumption was about 100
billion
kWh
lower.
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