The graph below shows percentages of types of waste that were recycled in a town between 2000 and 2010.
This
barchart
illustrates the proportion of various Correct your spelling
bar chart
type
of waste Fix the agreement mistake
types
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that were
were
reused in town from 2000 to 2010. Change the verb form
was
Overall
, in 2020, every waste Correct pronoun usage
that were
were
recycled increased dramatically without plastic where glass was always top during Change the verb form
was
this
graph.
Firstly
, in 1992, all reusable materials were in between 7 to 17 where
in 2002, they were grown in between 10 to 50. Correct word choice
whereas
Also
Morever
, almost half of the used glass was converted to use again and paper was 40 Correct your spelling
Moreover
percent
.
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per cent
However
, Wrong verb form
recycling
recycle
of plastic Replace the word
recycling
was
almost saturated Verb problem
has
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apply
all
over Correct determiner usage
apply
Correct article usage
apply
the
time.Correct article usage
apply
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