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The chart below gives the information about science qualification held by people in two countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below gives the information about science qualification held by people in two countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The diagrams depict
about
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apply
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the details of
qualification
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qualifications
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 that were held by
community
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the community
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reside
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residing
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 in two countries which are Malaysia, and Singapore. Each of the details
were
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splited
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split
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in
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Master's
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a Master's
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 degree,
Bachelor's
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a Bachelor's
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 degree, School leaving exams and no qualification in science. Looking into the details, most of the science
qualifiction
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qualification
qualifications
 that have been held in Malaysia was approximately 65 per cent compared to
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Singapore
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singapore
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Singapore
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 which
were
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 being more

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