The chart shows the proportion of energy produced from different sources in a country between1985 and 2003.

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give information about the margins of different types of resources used in producing

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in a country, between 1985 and 2003.

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,

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remained the main

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of

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in both years,

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natural gas, coal, and nuclear

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utilised. Meanwhile, other renewable resources stayed

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bottom of the list. In 1985,

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was the widely used

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of

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, occupying more than half of the whole portion, with around

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% margin. Meanwhile, Nuclear, followed by

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, was the second most used

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with 22% of the whole. In the same year, other four resources,

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as coal, hydro, natural gas, and other renewable had portions that only ranged from 1% -13%, respectively. A lot of things

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changed in 2003, where natural gas and coal topped nuclear with 22% and 23% against nuclear's 8%,

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contrary to 1985 records.

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stayed at the top, the usage of

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visibly decreased, as illustrated

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its 39% margin.

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, other renewable remained the

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, despite the slight increase of 4%.