The diagram below shows the process of making a violin by hand. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below shows the process of making a violin by hand.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The schematic representation illustrates the process by which the
violin
is constructed by hand.
Overall
, it takes 8 steps to make a
violin
from scratch.
Initially
, a saw is used to cut the precise shape of the
violin
from a thin piece of wood. The same process is repeated again so that both the back and the
front
parts are cut out.
Following
this
, a cutting tool is used to carve 2 f-holes (mirror images of each other) on the
front
part. The bass bar is
then
glued to the middle of the
front
part. The next step involves a heating tool, which is used to curve unshaped rib strips into a variety of ribs with different curvatures.
Subsequently
, the body of the
violin
is made by glueing the
front
and back parts to either side of the ribs. In the final stages, the neck with a scroll is attached to the body of the
violin
, and additional parts
such
as strings are nailed into the assembled
violin
.
Lastly
, the piece is coated with varnish, forming a completed
violin
ready for use. In conclusion, to construct a
violin
a variety of tools are required which include wood, a saw, a cutting tool, glue, ribs, etc.
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