The diagram below shows the process of making a violin by hand. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below shows the process of making a violin by hand.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The schematic representation illustrates the process by which the
violin
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is constructed by hand.
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, it takes 8 steps to make a
violin
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from scratch.
Initially
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, a saw is used to cut the precise shape of the
violin
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from a thin piece of wood. The same process is repeated again so that both the back and the
front
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parts are cut out.
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this
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, a cutting tool is used to carve 2 f-holes (mirror images of each other) on the
front
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part. The bass bar is
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glued to the middle of the
front
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part. The next step involves a heating tool, which is used to curve unshaped rib strips into a variety of ribs with different curvatures.
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, the body of the
violin
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is made by glueing the
front
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and back parts to either side of the ribs. In the final stages, the neck with a scroll is attached to the body of the
violin
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, and additional parts
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as strings are nailed into the assembled
violin
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.
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, the piece is coated with varnish, forming a completed
violin
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ready for use. In conclusion, to construct a
violin
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a variety of tools are required which include wood, a saw, a cutting tool, glue, ribs, etc.
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