The diagram below show the stages and equipment used in the cement-making process, and how cement is used to produce concrete for building purposes. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

IELTS Writing Task Chart for The diagram below show the stages and equipment used in the cement-making process, and how cement is used to produce concrete for building purposes. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The two diagrams illustrate the

cement

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production process and its usage to produce concrete for

building

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the building

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process.

Overall

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cement-making

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the cement-making

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process involves four stages, including crushing, mixing, heating, and grinding. Following that,

cement

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will be required to produce concrete.

Firstly

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, limestone and clay were inserted

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into

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a crusher to combine and form them into powder. After that,

powder

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the powder

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will be mixed in a clinker prior to

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being

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heated in a rotating heater. Shortly after, the rotating heater will clink the materials before being

grinded

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ground

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and

formed

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forming

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cement

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. The end product,

cement

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, will be packed into bags for distribution or used

further

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to produce concrete. In the next step, concrete will be made from

the

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combination of 15%

cement

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, 10% water, 25% sand, and 50% gravel. The materials will be mixed to result in concrete,

further

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used for building purposes.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "further".

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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.

Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.

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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words cement with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: Only 2 basic words for charts were used.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.

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3
Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
1
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

3 paragraphs

138 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

diagram
stages
equipment
cement-making process
raw materials
crushed
heated
kiln
clinker
ground
fine powder
sand
gravel
water
concrete
building purposes

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