The diagram below show the stages and equipment used in the cement-making process, and how cement is used to produce concrete for building purposes. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The two diagrams illustrate the
cement
production process and its usage to produce concrete for Use synonyms
building
process. Add an article
the building
Overall
, Linking Words
Use synonyms
cement-making
process involves four stages, including crushing, mixing, heating, and grinding. Following that, Add an article
the cement-making
cement
will be required to produce concrete.
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Firstly
, limestone and clay were inserted Linking Words
to
a crusher to combine and form them into powder. After that, Change preposition
into
powder
will be mixed in a clinker prior to Add an article
the powder
be
heated in a rotating heater. Shortly after, the rotating heater will clink the materials before being Change the verb form
being
grinded
and Correct your spelling
ground
formed
Wrong verb form
forming
cement
. The end product, Use synonyms
cement
, will be packed into bags for distribution or used Use synonyms
further
to produce concrete.
In the next step, concrete will be made from Linking Words
the
combination of 15% Correct article usage
a
cement
, 10% water, 25% sand, and 50% gravel. The materials will be mixed to result in concrete, Use synonyms
further
used for building purposes.Linking Words
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