The line graph below shows the production of paper, wood pulp and sawn-wood in the UK from 1980 to 2000.

The line graph below shows the production of paper, wood pulp and

sawn-wood in the UK from 1980 to 2000.
The line chart displays data about
production
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the production
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of paper,
wood
pulp
and
sawn-
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sawn wood
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wood
in the United Kingdom from 1980 to 2000. Looking from an
overall
perspective, It can be seen that the paper and packaging had the highest figures,
while
wood
pulp
remained steadily unchanged and the sawn-woos showed negligibly lowest rates over the period. Despite
risen
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negligibly from 230
million
tonnes in 1990 paper and packing sharply increased to 350
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the end of the period.
Sawn-
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Sawn wood
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wood
and
wood
pulp
were considerably lower. The figures of the sawn-
wood
started fell steadily from 200 to 150
million
tones
,
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and has
it
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lowest
rates
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rate
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of 75 produce in 2020.
In contrast
,
wood
pulp
began lower at 165
million
tones
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tonnes
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, decreased gradually to 150 in 1990 and
then
recovered slightly to approximately 155
million
tonnes in the of the period.
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  • line graph
  • production
  • paper
  • wood pulp
  • sawn-wood
  • fluctuations
  • peak
  • trough
  • trend
  • significant
  • turning point
  • correlation
  • inverse relationship
  • environmental policy
  • demand
  • technological advancements
  • implications
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