The line graph below shows the production of paper, wood pulp and sawn-wood in the UK from 1980 to 2000.
The line chart displays data about
production
of paper, Add an article
the production
wood
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pulp
and Use synonyms
sawn-
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sawn wood
wood
in the United Kingdom from 1980 to 2000.
Looking from an Use synonyms
overall
perspective, It can be seen that the paper and packaging had the highest figures, Linking Words
while
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wood
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pulp
remained steadily unchanged and the sawn-woos showed negligibly lowest rates over the period.
Despite Use synonyms
risen
negligibly from 230 Wrong verb form
rising
million
tonnes in 1990 paper and packing sharply increased to 350 Use synonyms
in
the end of the period. Change the preposition
at
Sawn-
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Sawn wood
wood
and Use synonyms
wood
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pulp
were considerably lower. The figures of the sawn-Use synonyms
wood
started fell steadily from 200 to 150 Use synonyms
million
tonesUse synonyms
,
and has Remove the comma
apply
it
lowest Change the pronoun
its
rates
of 75 produce in 2020. Fix the agreement mistake
rate
In contrast
, Linking Words
wood
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pulp
began lower at 165 Use synonyms
million
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tones
, decreased gradually to 150 in 1990 and Correct your spelling
tonnes
then
recovered slightly to approximately 155 Linking Words
million
tonnes in the of the period.Use synonyms
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