The diagram below illustrates how a simple water filter is constructed and how it functions to produce clean drinking water. Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below illustrates how a simple water filter is constructed and how it functions to produce clean drinking water.

Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The graphs supplied demonstrate how a straightforward
water
filter
is constructed and how the procedure has resulted in clean drinking
water
.
Overall
, those of the
step
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were being consist
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were being consisted
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of several steps, that
filter
from the gravel.
First,
the gravel and charvel will be inserted to
filter
out the bacteria that were being mixed in the
water
.
Then
, these bacteria will go through the process of the sand and adjust themselves.
Next,
the gravel will be connected through the
water
storage tank and inserted by the tap, followed by the adding the Impure
water
to the top of those
filter
, and
finally
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the
water
that
are
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being use by those step the
water
water
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will be rested for one day and after
that
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it will
be prepare
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be prepared
be preparing
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for the use of
this
.

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Introduction: The introduction is missing.
Introduction: Change the first sentence in the introduction.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Vocabulary: Replace the words water, filter with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 1 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • diagram
  • illustrates
  • simple water filter
  • constructed
  • functions
  • produce
  • clean drinking water
  • main features
  • comparisons
  • relevant
  • introduction
  • explanation
  • construction
  • description
  • filtered water
  • original water source
  • conclusion
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