The chart below illustrates the proportion of change in the share of global students amid university graduates in different Canadian states among 2001 and 2006.

The chart below illustrates the proportion of change in the share of global students

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university graduates in different Canadian states

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2001 and 2006. There are given 8 universities and the percentage of students that graduated between 2001 and 2006

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a Statistics Canada, Postsecondary Student Information System. The highest one is New Brunswick, in 2001

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of graduates made it to 7-8%, after

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years it went even

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and reached the mark of 12%.

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Brunswick

had been the best, Ontario had been the worst in both years.Almost similar results showed 4 universities

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Nova Scotia, British Columbia; Manitoba and Newfoundland and Labrador.

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both same indicators were noticed in 2006,

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second similarity in 2001 and 2006. The third best place of

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is Quebec,

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seduction amounted to 7% in 2001 and 9% in 2006. After Quebec, there is

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called Alberta. Instite's mark went to 4% in 2001 and 6% in 2006.