The line graph and pie chart below show information on crime in the UK for the last year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The line graph and pie chart below show information on crime in the UK for the last year.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph shows the relationship between
age
and
crime
,
while
the pie chart shows the types of
crime
in the UK.
Overall
, the
crime
rate is significantly higher in the 16-24
age
group than in the rest of the population.
On the other hand
, violent
crime
accounts for almost half of the four different types of
crime
. As far as the relationship with
age
is concerned, we can see that there is no criminal activity until the
age
of 8.
On the other hand
, involvement starts at
age
12 with 5 (tens of thousands) and rises remarkably to 70 at
age
16.
Furthermore
, one of the most significant data is that the number of crimes peaks at the
age
of 20,
while
after that we can clearly see a decreasing trend.
In addition
, as people get older, the number of crimes decreases, so there is a negative correlation between
age
and the number of crimes committed. When it comes to the pie chart, there are four different types of
crime
and violent
crime
is the most common type of
crime
with 46%, followed by property
crime
and drug
crime
with 23% and 22% respectively. The
last
type of
crime
, public order
crime
, is the least common type of
crime
in the UK with only 9%.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "on the other hand, while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words age, crime with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "shows" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "significantly" was used 2 times.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • The line graph depicts
  • The pie chart illustrates
  • reveals
  • displays
  • depicts
  • the trend of
  • the overall crime rate
  • steadily decreased
  • the distribution of
  • different types of crime
  • prevalent
  • accounts for
  • the most common crime
  • followed by
  • make up
  • a smaller proportion of
  • the total crimes
  • a smaller percentage
  • approximately
  • the remaining percentage
  • It is important to note that
  • reflects
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