The line graph and pie chart below show information on crime in the UK for the last year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph shows the relationship between
age
and crime
, while
the pie chart shows the types of crime
in the UK.
Overall
, the crime
rate is significantly higher in the 16-24 age
group than in the rest of the population. On the other hand
, violent crime
accounts for almost half of the four different types of crime
.
As far as the relationship with age
is concerned, we can see that there is no criminal activity until the age
of 8. On the other hand
, involvement starts at age
12 with 5 (tens of thousands) and rises remarkably to 70 at age
16. Furthermore
, one of the most significant data is that the number of crimes peaks at the age
of 20, while
after that we can clearly see a decreasing trend. In addition
, as people get older, the number of crimes decreases, so there is a negative correlation between age
and the number of crimes committed.
When it comes to the pie chart, there are four different types of crime
and violent crime
is the most common type of crime
with 46%, followed by property crime
and drug crime
with 23% and 22% respectively. The last
type of crime
, public order crime
, is the least common type of crime
in the UK with only 9%.Submitted by hburakdisli on
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