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As global trade increases between different countries, many daily necessities are produced in other countries. Such goods are usually transported a long distance. Do the benefits of this trend outweigh its drawbacks?

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It is generally known,
we
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that we
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 usually use the important
goods
 on a daily basis that we got from other countries, which means it requires the process of importing
goods
. Personally, I hold the perception that
this
 trade has more drawbacks
especially
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, especially
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 for local brands. There are various reasons why most
people
 use imported
products
 on a daily basis.
Firstly
, the price is more chips and
have
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high quality, so
people
 are more interested in using them or
to resell
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reselling them
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. Foreign companies can sell at a cheaper price than other similar
products
 because they produce the
products
 on a wide scale.
Secondly
, imported
goods
 give more high technology and
easy
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 to use so it makes jobs easier.
For example
, many imported
goods
such
 as cleaning robots
that
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can help
people
to
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clean rooms without touch because the robot can detect the dirty and have a schedule for cleaning. In spite of
this
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these
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 reasons, I am inclined to argue that increases
of
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 imported
products
 could kill the production of local
products
. It is important to educate
people
 to love local
products
 to support economic growth. If increasing global trade continues it will make small and medium enterprises lose their jobs and become unemployed. Local
products
 might not be more modern than imported
products
 but local
products
 are usually made from high quality composition and can be used for a longer period than imported
products
.
Moreover
, local
products
 maintain the economic circulation of other local raw materials. In conclusion, with the reasons mentioned above, I think that
people
 should be more aware of the importance of loving local
products
 and the government might restrict
the
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imported
product
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products
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.
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