The chart below shows the percentage of households in owned and rented accommodation in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Wnte at least 150 words 90 80 70 60 % of households 6 8 30 20 10 0 Households owning and renting accommodation in England and Wales 1918 to 2011 1918 1939 1953 1961 1971 1981 1991 2001 2011
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The given image depicts a bar chart representing the trends in the percentage of households whether they owned or rented in England and whales between 1918 and 2011.
As can be seen from the graph, the rented
accommodation
has
high in 1918 Verb problem
was
then
it was consistently reduced until 2001. Whereas
, the ownership of household accommodation
was lower in 1918 after following
years it Correct article usage
the following
was
increased gradually until 2001.
Unnecessary verb
apply
On the other hand
, the owning and renting accommodations were equal level in 1971 at 50%.
Therefore
, the higher difference between rent and owned housing percentage in 1918 at almost 50%. Remarkably, between 1939 and 1953 rented and owned accommodation
has
equal levels at approximately 7% and 30%.
Wrong verb form
had
Moreover
, people bought
their own homes Correct pronoun usage
who bought
was
increased consistently Unnecessary verb
apply
at
almost 83 years Change preposition
for
then
it saw little reduction in 2011. Likewise
, the rented
Accommodation
was decreased continuously. However
, in 2011, it saw small improvements in both countries.Submitted by krishmahendran19 on
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