In some countries employees are generally given two weeks of paid vacation time each year. In other countries employers are given four or six weeks of paid vacation time. Considering the need of both employee and employer, what do you think is a reasonable amount of paid vacation time for employees to have? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience

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vacation

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your company depend on

countries

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and employer ,Some countries obtain two weeks of paid

vacation

annually ,and

another

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countries obtain 4 to 6 week

paid

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vacation

yearly. I completely with a short paid

vacation

. In my

opinion

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two weeks of paid

vacation

is

obtained

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more reasonable and useful for

employees

;

firstly

short duration to come back to work

and

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still fresh and

focus

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, and

long

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to

have

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a

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rest and relax

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vacation

has a negative impact

for

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both

of

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the

employees

and companies. For the company to employers must

paid

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much money

from

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it

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serves

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;which can be invested one other useful things that lead to

expand

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the company service ,

such

as

establish

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new branches, resting

room

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or entertainment

area

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for

employees

to stress release on break time. The impact

of

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employees

is

overload

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work much activities to do

that

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caused by

decrease

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the

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staff members who get paid

vacation

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lead

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to Inappropriate and a lot of mistakes

of

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, there are

argue

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for short a

long paid

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long-paid

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vacation

but I completely with

short paid

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vacation

and

this

will be more

benefit

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for

employees

and

employer

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employers

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.