ome people think that all university students should study whatever they like. Others believe that they should only be allowed to study subjects that will be useful in the future, such as those related to science and technology. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion

These days, there are numerous interesting

subjects

that

students

can learn in the university. some people believe that college

students

should only concentrate on the fundamental

cirriculum

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curriculum

such

as math, science, and computer,

whereas

others reckon that they should be allowed to learn their favourite

subjects

. In

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essay, both

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of

views

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will be elaborated on

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following paragraphs before my perspective is reached. On the one hand, it is

deniable

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that mandatory classes play a vital role in working

life

in the future. As the high paid and important jobs including a

doctor

, an engineer, an

accountance

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accountant

accountancy

, and many more need to be

expert

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in physiology, biology, chemistry, and math, they have to devote their full time to

study

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and

revise

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the lesson.

For example

,

being

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a

doctor

in Thailand,

students

need to spend 6 consecutive years with

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intensive courses and

examination

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.

Therefore

, the person who

want

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to have a good job

need

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to

study

hard.

On the other hand

, devoting time only

focusing

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on

the

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intensive

subjects

can lead to depression.

Therefore

,

others

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classes

such

as music, cooking, painting, and

sport

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are compulsory for them.

According to

statistical data,

students

who

study

in the faculty of engineering and medicine have

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the

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record percentage

to commit

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suicide.

Moreover

, some people who are an expertise in art and music can be more successful than

the

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regular jobs like a

doctor

or an engineer. To illustrate, John

lennon

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, a member

in

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the Beatle band, wrote the song named "Imagine", which was able to stop a war and bring peace to the world. These can save more

life

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lives

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than being a

doctor

. In conclusion,

although

the mandatory

cirriculums

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curriculums

curriculum

are imperative

due to

being useful in future working

life

, parents and authorities should not

enforce

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students

to solely

study

these

subjects

as it can make them anxious and there are many

succesful

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successful

people from other careers. In my opinion,

students

should

allow

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to learn whatever they want and let them decide their own

life

.